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So You Want to Write for Children

Watch out for these 7 common mistakes

Mary Oluonye
4 min readNov 18, 2020
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The idea has been floating around in your mind for years. You want to write a children’s book. Wonderful! Now is the perfect time to get started. But before you begin, take a moment to read over these 7 common mistakes made by beginning writers.

Once you’ve read over the mistakes to avoid, pull out your notebook, laptop or other device, make yourself comfortable and get started.

Common Mistake 1: Writing that “talks down” to children

Children, even very young children from beginning or emergent readers and up, are very astute. They can tell when a story is condescending, or to put it in their own words, “is a baby book.”

Trust me, when a young reader or listener is choosing a book to read, and says that a particular book is a “baby book,” it does not bode well for the book. It means that they they are not interested in the book at all. The author has already lost that reader.

A child will label a book baby-ish, when the writer uses overly simplified language and situations that are out of synch with the age of the reader.

Common Mistake 2: Writing a story that is too didactic

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Mary Oluonye
Mary Oluonye

Written by Mary Oluonye

Writer| Editor| Africa Travel Specialist| I write about writing, travel, valuing self and others & self-improvement. Best way to reach me: mary@maryoluonye.com

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